You have written some fairly detailed textual analysis of camera and editing, although this is not always clearly enough explored in relation to the meaning / connotations. You have given some ideas of how you might use this video in your own ideas. This could be more explicit at times. The presentation could be more visual with stills added. Proof read for careless mistakes. Vanessa
You have written some fairly detailed textual analysis of camera and editing, although this is not always clearly enough explored in relation to the meaning / connotations. You have given some ideas of how you might use this video in your own ideas. This could be more explicit at times. The presentation could be more visual with stills added. Proof read for careless mistakes. Vanessa
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